DeityStar's Game Master formal Application

What is your name?

People call me Deitybut my real name is Adam

IGN?
Sensei

Why do you want to be a GM in BoredMS?
So i can make this server more enjoyable for new player and every1 themselves

What would you do as a GM in BoredMS?
I will certainly help the server by catching hackers, which all of the GM's are supposed to do, and help anyone who has any questions.

What sets you apart from everyone else ingame?
My Personality and other stuff but im Rare i Respect all your rules and i follow them

Why do you think we should choose you?
Because I have lot of experiance and I will Follow the rules. I take my job as a GM seriously and I always carry out my GM duties.I do not ban for grudges or if somebody pisses me off; I only ban if somebody deliberately breaks the rules. I don't let emotion affect my decisions.

Tell Us About yourself
i like playing other games too Doing Stuff outside thats all if you wanna know more about me talk to me in-game!

DeityStar wrote:

Why do you think we should choose you?
Because I have lot of experiance and I will Follow the rules. I take my job as a GM seriously and I always carry out my GM duties.I do not ban for grudges or if somebody pisses me off; I only ban if somebody deliberately breaks the rules. I don't let emotion affect my decisions.

So accurate nice [: GL!

You have two apps posted in the same section so if you don't mind I'll delete one if that's okay with you :3?
*doesn't notice a difference between the 2*

Anyways onto the pros and cons about your app.

Pros.
One of your answers is pretty sexy :3
I mean it,
Why do you think we should choose you?:
You said in a very blunt way and with a very confident writing style so I applaud you for that

Cons.
A lot of mistakes in terms of grammar, although most of it is just capitalization so who really cares
Some of your answers unfourtantely are not as great as they could be. (Why should we choose you?)
You are Rare... okay but How are you Rare? You need to elaborate on some points.
Don't ramble way too much though Keep it simple and straight to the point. But also make it informative
It feels like you are hiding some info that should be put into your app (I.E I'm pretty sure you can tell us more about yourself or once again Why you are a Rare person)

Aside from that one answer this app needs to be worked on.
Unfourtantely just because you have one great answer doesn't mean your rating is gonna be really high.
Although I encourage you to edit it you may choose to leave your app like this if you are feeling too lazy to edit it.

Good Luck to you :3
Rating: 6/10